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Lee-Ann Admitted to Forum Help Hospital


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shemia Forum Junkie


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YOu are bringing tears to my eye's....  |
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2003 8:51 pm Post subject: |
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Robbie that was fantastic! Your making me want to cry too!!! But I won't because I think that's a bit too girly for me! (that was a joke girls - "Hey how you doin?"... woop's sorry about that... it was a joke too!). You have also inspired me to write a poem but I'm going to spend my day at work tomorrow putting some thought into it. _________________
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Lee-Ann Admitted to Forum Help Hospital


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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2003 11:59 pm Post subject: |
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okay this should be really good. do they all have to be poems or can we put down train of thought things about Marmac, because I write a lot about Marmac and it isn't really poetry! _________________ Normality is highly overrated! |
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2003 7:00 pm Post subject: |
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Write whatever you want hun... but a poem would be nice!  _________________
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2003 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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fine... I will attempt to convert my writings into poetic form! make life dificult why don't you?  _________________ Normality is highly overrated! |
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2003 7:44 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah i thought it would be fun! I forgot to think up a poem... I think I need to read Robbie again to re-inspire myself! _________________
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2003 7:45 pm Post subject: |
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yes that was quite inspiring! _________________ Normality is highly overrated! |
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2003 12:27 am Post subject: |
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maybe i'll post a few of my poems written at marmac. i am a poet u know?? i dunno if this school knew much about my poetry..hmm interesting thought..all these posts have provoked me to much pondering. strange very strange. _________________ Kathryn Jean* |
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shemia Forum Junkie


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| I love your poems Kat write some more and post them they are great |
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2003 6:48 pm Post subject: |
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Hot or cold
Black or white
Good and evil is the fight
Fight? Not really. I know who's going to win. For evil stands no chance when fighting against Him. He is my rock. On Him shall I stand. 'Cuz anything else is just sinking sand. Stand on the rock. There's only one. Stand on the rock or sink... and all is done! _________________ Normality is highly overrated! |
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Ok I really like this poem because it makes my spine tingle when I hear it! They did a take off of it in the Simpsons and I Love it! It's quite long and don't read it if you are easily freaked out because it is meant to be a horror poem! I love it tho! Hun your's was great! give us more!!!
THE RAVEN
by Edgar Allan Poe
(1845)
Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
"'Tis some visitor," I muttered, "tapping at my chamber door-
Only this, and nothing more."
Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow;- vainly I had sought to borrow
From my books surcease of sorrow- sorrow for the lost Lenore-
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore-
Nameless here for evermore.
And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain
Thrilled me- filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before;
So that now, to still the beating of my heart, I stood repeating,
"'Tis some visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door-
Some late visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door;-
This it is, and nothing more."
Presently my soul grew stronger; hesitating then no longer,
"Sir," said I, "or Madam, truly your forgiveness I implore;
But the fact is I was napping, and so gently you came rapping,
And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door,
That I scarce was sure I heard you"- here I opened wide the door;-
Darkness there, and nothing more.
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering,
fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token,
And the only word there spoken was the whispered word, "Lenore!"
This I whispered, and an echo murmured back the word, "Lenore!"-
Merely this, and nothing more.
Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning,
Soon again I heard a tapping somewhat louder than before.
"Surely," said I, "surely that is something at my window lattice:
Let me see, then, what thereat is, and this mystery explore-
Let my heart be still a moment and this mystery explore;-
'Tis the wind and nothing more."
Open here I flung the shutter, when, with many a flirt and
flutter,
In there stepped a stately raven of the saintly days of yore;
Not the least obeisance made he; not a minute stopped or stayed
he;
But, with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door-
Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above my chamber door-
Perched, and sat, and nothing more.
Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,
By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore.
"Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou," I said, "art sure no
craven,
Ghastly grim and ancient raven wandering from the Nightly shore-
Tell me what thy lordly name is on the Night's Plutonian shore!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,
Though its answer little meaning- little relevancy bore;
For we cannot help agreeing that no living human being
Ever yet was blest with seeing bird above his chamber door-
Bird or beast upon the sculptured bust above his chamber door,
With such name as "Nevermore."
But the raven, sitting lonely on the placid bust, spoke only
That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour.
Nothing further then he uttered- not a feather then he fluttered-
Till I scarcely more than muttered, "other friends have flown
before-
On the morrow he will leave me, as my hopes have flown before."
Then the bird said, "Nevermore."
Startled at the stillness broken by reply so aptly spoken,
"Doubtless," said I, "what it utters is its only stock and store,
Caught from some unhappy master whom unmerciful Disaster
Followed fast and followed faster till his songs one burden bore-
Till the dirges of his Hope that melancholy burden bore
Of 'Never- nevermore'."
But the Raven still beguiling all my fancy into smiling,
Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird, and bust and
door;
Then upon the velvet sinking, I betook myself to linking
Fancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore-
What this grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt and ominous bird of yore
Meant in croaking "Nevermore."
This I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressing
To the fowl whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom's core;
This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease reclining
On the cushion's velvet lining that the lamplight gloated o'er,
But whose velvet violet lining with the lamplight gloating o'er,
She shall press, ah, nevermore!
Then methought the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose footfalls tinkled on the tufted floor.
"Wretch," I cried, "thy God hath lent thee- by these angels he
hath sent thee
Respite- respite and nepenthe, from thy memories of Lenore!
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Lenore!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
"Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil!- prophet still, if bird or
devil!-
Whether Tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted-
On this home by horror haunted- tell me truly, I implore-
Is there- is there balm in Gilead?- tell me- tell me, I implore!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
"Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil- prophet still, if bird or
devil!
By that Heaven that bends above us- by that God we both adore-
Tell this soul with sorrow laden if, within the distant Aidenn,
It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels name Lenore-
Clasp a rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore."
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
"Be that word our sign in parting, bird or fiend," I shrieked,
upstarting-
"Get thee back into the tempest and the Night's Plutonian shore!
Leave no black plume as a token of that lie thy soul hath spoken!
Leave my loneliness unbroken!- quit the bust above my door!
Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my
door!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
And the Raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
And the lamplight o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the
floor;
And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted- nevermore!
-- THE END --
Ooooo... it makes me go all tingly!!! I love it!!! _________________
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That is definately a good one! We had to read that in school! _________________ Normality is highly overrated! |
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